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 | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly  Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:47 pm | |
| The bullet would probably kill her  |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:48 pm | |
| Caster is a nice guy though. Just ally with him.  You know you want to.  _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:53 pm | |
| pfff, if anything he should be the one to ally with me |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:59 pm | |
| Why is that? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:08 pm | |
| wow you don't know that expression |
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Prisma*Illya
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:10 pm | |
| I know the expression. I'm just making negotiations. >:0 _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:31 pm | |
| Saber doesn't approve.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:36 pm | |
| Hey, here's my query letter. Let me know what you guys think. :0 - Spoiler:
Dear [agent],
The truth that sets you free just might kill you.
Seventeen-year-old Aiden Milligan is a prep school student whose sharp intellect and scathing wit are matched only by his misanthropy. Hardened by a past best forgotten, Aiden's greatest desire is to simply be left alone. After many years of moving through orphanages and foster care, he finally manages to find some peace and stability at New Hampshire's prestigious Covington Academy.
But a series of unexplained events begins to rock Aiden's carefully shielded world, and the caustic attitude that has gained him so many enemies now casts dark dispersions on him that could threaten all he's worked so hard to build. Forced to team up with an eccentric and dogged occult newswriter named Jessie, Aiden must seek out the answers to the strange happenings in the city and clear his name.
But the truth can pierce deep, and Aiden might not be ready for what he learns. Faced with a choice that will define his future, and the future of many others, Aiden will have to look deep within and determine who he really is.
The Mortal Coil: Revelation is a 65,000 word YA novel and the first of four books that seek to explore the inevitable clash between the world outside and the world within oneself. This series will be sure to capture the young adult demographic your agency is seeking.
Attached below is the synopsis and the first five pages of the novel. Thank you for your time and consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.
_________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:50 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:54 pm | |
| Good. ^^
So, you never answered. Have you gotten any more reading done? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:56 pm | |
| Oh, I missed the question.
Unfortunately, the answer is no.
I should have done some this morning, but I slept in. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 5:59 pm | |
|  Don't you want me to get published?  _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:04 pm | |
| I don't think I'm solely responsible for you getting published.  look at it this way: adversity builds character~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:12 pm | |
| I don't think your laziness and lack of discipline counts as adversity. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:51 pm | |
| Oh, how you wound me, Kitty.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:15 pm | |
| I haven't even started wounding you. *gets out the flail* _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:22 pm | |
| be gentle. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 7:36 pm | |
| That would defeat the point.  _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 8:13 pm | |
| I disagree.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 8:26 pm | |
| You'd better be reading right now. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 8:45 pm | |
| I'm at my sister's house.
So, I'm not. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:00 pm | |
| Why? >:/ _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:06 pm | |
| Cause this is where the party's at? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 10:01 pm | |
| What party? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chat Thread 20: The Good, The Chat, and The Ugly Sat Nov 07, 2015 11:21 pm | |
| Just a typical Saturday night party.
Nothing special going on. We're just living life. | |
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