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RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 3:00 pm | |
| k, I didn't want to say this in such a way (was hoping the re-write would make this clear, it clearly didn't which is on my head.) You are not going to have both sky and dark magic in this setting.
Also please don't do a character with no/lost memory, I know you are fond of such people but I would rather you made him someone with a past, not just a blank slate. Also it really is impossible for a nomad to have access to magic, I might let you keep half, but you must justify it.
P.S. you are a member of the army, should I put that in bold in the first post? | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 3:08 pm | |
| - RyubosJ wrote:
- k, I didn't want to say this in such a way (was hoping the re-write would make this clear, it clearly didn't which is on my head.) You are not going to have both sky and dark magic in this setting.
Also please don't do a character with no/lost memory, I know you are fond of such people but I would rather you made him someone with a past, not just a blank slate. Also it really is impossible for a nomad to have access to magic, I might let you keep half, but you must justify it.
P.S. you are a member of the army, should I put that in bold in the first post? You really should have said that in the first place. The whole "re-write" wasn't exactly clear on what the issue was. I'll get on it then~ | |
| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 4:03 pm | |
| - Spiriter wrote:
- I've been one for ages Illya
Heil! He says as he fails to put a comma before the name of the person he's addressing. "I've been one for ages, Illya." _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 4:23 pm | |
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| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 4:31 pm | |
| Excuses. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 12, 2015 8:27 pm | |
| Spirit is only a GN when he's pointing out the mistakes of others | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Fri Mar 13, 2015 1:34 pm | |
| - RyubosJ wrote:
- Spirit is only a GN when he's pointing out the mistakes of others
Shots fired, Ryu. Shots Fired. | |
| | | SnedHlepPls Worthless Wordslinger
Posts : 197 Join date : 2015-03-13 Age : 27 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 14, 2015 12:40 pm | |
| Hi everyone,
I'm one of Ryu's RL friends. Nice to meet you! | |
| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 14, 2015 12:40 pm | |
| Hello and welcome. Nice to have you onboard. :0 _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 14, 2015 1:33 pm | |
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| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:18 am | |
| Nice 'ta meet 'cha!
Yea I'll get on that proper history then. *had a mountain of homework yesterday* I really should stop letting it accumulate. Should. | |
| | | SnedHlepPls Worthless Wordslinger
Posts : 197 Join date : 2015-03-13 Age : 27 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Mon Mar 16, 2015 6:12 pm | |
| Okay, got the first draft of my character (sorry Ryu for taking my time): - Spoiler:
Name: Zolf Arglan Age: 23 Gender: Male Magic Elements: Ice, Thunder Appearance: Zolf is of average height, with pale grey eyes and short, black hair. Personality: - Spoiler:
Zolf is a quiet individual, although recent years spent interacting with those from beyond his humble village has allowed him to overcome his previous shyness. He has a kind heart, and willing to protect those who need it. He has a particular hatred towards brigands and bandits due to his past.
History: - Spoiler:
Zolf hails from a small village between Tevulra and Zoffany. At a young age, his parents were taken by sickness, leaving Zolf and his sister, Freya, with their uncle. Using the family savings that their parents left them, Freya went to the University of Zoffany to study the mysteries of magic.
During a brief trip back to the village, Freya was killed by brigands. In her last moments, she gave Zolf her bag, containing a small handful of crystals and notes related to her studies. Zolf, along with a few others from the village, managed to escape, eventually making their way to Zoffany.
In order to afford lodging, Zolf enlisted with the local militia. Through reading the notes left in Freya’s bag and experimentation with some of the crystals, he deduced that he had a particular affinity for the Ice and Thunder aspects, though of course, without training there was not much he could do with the knowledge. Instead, he focused on developing his archery skills, which he had previous experience with hunting for the village. After a few years, Zolf left for the North, in order to join the military. He is currently in one of the numerous scout units.
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| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Mon Mar 16, 2015 6:37 pm | |
| Your grammar is excellent. Are you sure you know Ryu? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | aradials Worthless Wordslinger
Posts : 73 Join date : 2015-03-17 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Tue Mar 17, 2015 5:52 pm | |
| Hey guys, like Sned I'm one of Ryu's real life mates. Pleased to meet you all! I had a go at drafting a character for this RP. Sorry it took so long! This alright? - Spoiler:
Name: Jim Patterson Age: 36 Gender: Male Magic Element: Wood Appearance: - Spoiler:
Jim has clean dusty brown hair, and brown eyes to match. Plain face, but has a lot of stubble. Wears a torn dark green cloak (clearly used), with a plain blue top underneath. Dirty black trousers, and black boots that are falling apart. He has a very muscular build, and when he speaks it's in a low, gravelly voice.
Personality:- Spoiler:
In a word: Gruff. Jim tries to be reasonable with most people he talks to, though his bluntness is a hindrance. Usually when he speaks it’s short and to the point, suggesting he’s not much of a socialiser. That’s not really true however; indeed, while his gruffness may imply he’s apathetic to his teammates’ causes he isn’t, he’ll pretty much get on with anyone, long as they don’t turn out to be some sort of lunatic or anything similarly dangerous. Also, while he isn't usually the one to start them, he has no qualms with getting into a fight if it's required.
History: - Spoiler:
Jim has spent pretty much his entire life in Curgila, and in truth, very little has happened to him. He grew up into a family of lumbermen, he learnt the trade, and then when his father died, took over the company. The business (creatively named Patterson Logging Comp. , imagination wasn’t his grandfather’s strongest point) was small, but managed to cover most of the industry’s areas; chopping down the forest’s trees, processing them, and then selling them to the highest seller. In a market so saturated in logging companies Patterson Logging Comp didn’t stand out too much. However, those who used it were nearly always satisfied with its quality goods, and word slowly got around and more and more customers came. The company was never swimming in customers, but there were more than enough to make a profit. So for many years Jim was satisfied. Money was coming in, sales were increasing, and everything seemed to be going pretty well.
However, as he grew older Jim soon grew bored at his job. Despite the money it was momentous, dull, and not particularly interesting. There are only so many trees a man can cut down, only so many sales a person can make, only so many times you can pull off a particularly impressive deal before your interest falters. To his dismay even the small amounts of magic, which he practised in his spare time, that he could do were all dull; proclaiming your ability in the wooden arts hardly sounded as impressive as, say, being a fire user or being in tune with the Light. After an especially tedious day filled with mediocrity, Jim came home, sat at his desk, and thought about his life in general. Was this how he wanted to spend the rest of his life? Chopping down trees and selling them? Hardly, it wasn’t really something he was going to be remembered for. Battling enemies in foreign lands would be much more interesting than this... Hell, even out of that, finding an affinity for something better than plain old wood would be something to do...
After spending the day thinking about it Jim decided that no, he wanted to do more with his life. Who cared if he sounded like he was just going through a mid age crisis, he knew there had to be more to life than just trees! He wanted to travel, get into fights, learn more about magic, to do something important. So after taking care of some loose ends, he handed control of the company to his younger brother and headed off to the North, with only some of the essentials hoisted over his shoulder in a bag. A few months later he found himself in the military, about to embark on a scouting mission. Hopefully it wouldn’t be his last.
If anything needs changing just give me a shout and I'll get on with fixing it! | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Wed Mar 18, 2015 3:48 pm | |
| Yea sorry I haven't edited that sheet yet, I have exams. Who else hates those? | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Wed Mar 18, 2015 8:23 pm | |
| @Sned looks fine, just a note though I'm only letting you have two lightning crystals, and don't expect to find any in the near future.
@Ara yep mostly fine, could you just add a few more months to your training time, say to a total of year and a half?
@Spirit that's fine, and no exams are much better than reports or essays | |
| | | SnedHlepPls Worthless Wordslinger
Posts : 197 Join date : 2015-03-13 Age : 27 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Thu Mar 19, 2015 7:29 am | |
| - Prisma*Illya wrote:
- Your grammar is excellent. Are you sure you know Ryu?
Haha, thanks, I try. ^_^ - RyubosJ wrote:
- @Sned looks fine, just a note though I'm only letting you have two lightning crystals, and don't expect to find any in the near future.
Yeah, that's fine, I wasn't envisioning the character to be using magic a great deal anyway. | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 21, 2015 11:50 am | |
| - RyubosJ wrote:
- @Sned looks fine, just a note though I'm only letting you have two lightning crystals, and don't expect to find any in the near future.
@Ara yep mostly fine, could you just add a few more months to your training time, say to a total of year and a half?
@Spirit that's fine, and no exams are much better than reports or essays Dude. The exams include 2+ page essays. In about 2.2 hours. Good thing the exams have time limits or they'd make us write way more than 2+ pages. Anyway, I can write now so I'll get to it. My next one is in a week, and there should be days in between so I'll be here. | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 28, 2015 6:51 pm | |
| so spirit is back I'll be posting the IC next week.
Anyone else wanting to make a sheet get on it :p | |
| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 28, 2015 6:55 pm | |
| Sure, you were waiting on him. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:30 pm | |
| I was, he said he would update his sheet | |
| | | Prisma*Illya Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037 Join date : 2013-07-11 Age : 33 Location : The Black Versailles
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Sat Mar 28, 2015 8:37 pm | |
| So, you got four people then? What was your goal? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Tue Apr 07, 2015 6:08 pm | |
| *Spirit is back* My exams finally ended | |
| | | Spiriter Amateur Author
Posts : 3423 Join date : 2013-09-25 Age : 27 Location : Project Hell
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Tue Apr 07, 2015 6:21 pm | |
| - Spiriter wrote:
- Spoiler:
Character Sheet: Name: Exodus Age: N/A Gender: Male Magic Element: Ice, Sky Appearance:- Spoiler:
Personality:- Spoiler:
Exodus was raised more or less isolated from human contact, and, as a result, is not well versed with human interaction. This also leads him to be quiet, but also highly observant, allowing him to notice slight details better than most. When not in a battle, or otherwise serious situation, he has a short attention span for anything that doesn't enrapture his interest, and also has an almost childlike tendency to go off on a whim. While he has trouble talking to new persons, he has a considerably easier time with those he's become used to being around. History:- Spoiler:
Born to a clan of lesser nobles, upon finding his affinity to use magic, they spent most of their fortunes on training his abilities. He was raised more or less in isolation, to be a symbol of the restoration of the family's power. His prowess with a staff, however, far outshone his ability with magic, and his use of both in combination was even more spectacular. However, the family completely collapsed several years prior, which ended with Exodus being left alone. Not knowing what else to do, he somehow ended up posted at the scouts of the border.
How's that Ryu? Ps. Updated the sheet. | |
| | | RyubosJ Simplistic Scripter
Posts : 1637 Join date : 2013-08-23 Age : 29 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: The Terrene: Forest at War OOC Mon Apr 13, 2015 5:51 am | |
| - Spiriter wrote:
- Spiriter wrote:
- Spoiler:
Character Sheet: Name: Exodus Age: N/A Gender: Male Magic Element: Ice, Sky Appearance:- Spoiler:
Personality:- Spoiler:
Exodus was raised more or less isolated from human contact, and, as a result, is not well versed with human interaction. This also leads him to be quiet, but also highly observant, allowing him to notice slight details better than most. When not in a battle, or otherwise serious situation, he has a short attention span for anything that doesn't enrapture his interest, and also has an almost childlike tendency to go off on a whim. While he has trouble talking to new persons, he has a considerably easier time with those he's become used to being around. History:- Spoiler:
Born to a clan of lesser nobles, upon finding his affinity to use magic, they spent most of their fortunes on training his abilities. He was raised more or less in isolation, to be a symbol of the restoration of the family's power. His prowess with a staff, however, far outshone his ability with magic, and his use of both in combination was even more spectacular. However, the family completely collapsed several years prior, which ended with Exodus being left alone. Not knowing what else to do, he somehow ended up posted at the scouts of the border.
How's that Ryu? Ps. Updated the sheet. hum, okay it passes. Good job Also your sue of sky is limited due to simple avalibility | |
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