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Shayu Wolf
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PostSubject: Novel: Split   Sun Mar 30, 2014 11:25 am

Prologue: 2047

“Rebelliousness has always been in my nature, but I never fathomed I would get myself into the grand-master, intergalactic clusterfuck that I did (You’ll have to excuse my profanity, it’s also always been in my nature). But I wanted out of my country, and off Earth. So I filled out the papers, cashed out on the rest of my college fund, and caught a cruise off world. Catching that ship, I had it in my head that all I had to do was escape the bull**** and somehow things would be ok. No more politicians droning on with fake smiles, cramming trash into everyone’s heads, no more news stories about dwindling resources and hard times, no more watching the tired world get sucked dry by an oversized population it never had any business sustaining. Atlas, my destination, was to be my saving grace from all that crap.
Unfortunately things have a way with me, of not going the way I expect. I mean I did escape the grind, but with the catastrophe that followed, I found myself really wishing that I had been a good boy, stayed in college, and gotten a regular Joe’s job. It was only once Atlas began to turn me into an animal that I really started to see a different picture.
The ride to Atlas was the last little vacation I took as a civilized man. If only it could have lasted… I can still hear the shrieks and cries of all those poor bastards around me as the sky lit up, and the ship that had carried us all the way to Atlas, fell back down upon our own heads, before we could even set a foot into our new world.
What followed after that… well, there are plenty of stories to tell, many good ones many bad ones. What happened on Atlas in those following months, you could certainly write a book about it.”
-Jack “Shayu” Walker
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PostSubject: Update April 4th 2014   Thu Apr 03, 2014 8:07 pm

Chapter 1- FlyBoy:
 
Chapter 2- Rock-A-Bye:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Sun Apr 06, 2014 9:00 pm

Well, the chapters aren't at all what I expected from the prologue. :0 Can't say I'm at all partial to the protagonists at this point (if you can really call them that).

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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Thu Apr 10, 2014 10:20 am

Prisma*Illya wrote:
Well, the chapters aren't at all what I expected from the prologue. :0 Can't say I'm at all partial to the protagonists at this point (if you can really call them that).

Hmmm, I've heard that twice about the prologue and the 1st chapter conflicting. Tell me this though prisma, when you say you aren't partial to the protagonists, do you mean you don't like them, don't sympathise with them, or do they turn you off entirely in terms of being interested in the novel?
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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Thu Apr 10, 2014 6:44 pm

Hmm... all three? I mean I could be wrong, but at the moment they just seem like a bunch of d*ckhead terrorists/anarchists

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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Fri Apr 11, 2014 9:48 am

Prisma*Illya wrote:
Hmm... all three? I mean I could be wrong, but at the moment they just seem like a bunch of d*ckhead terrorists/anarchists

Well I do hope you'll read on, they have a few human moments soon ^^ . They are terrorists, not much way around that, but they didn't attack any civilians at least : p . I just don't want these guys to be so loathsome that you put the book down before they can show their nice side and motives.
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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Fri May 02, 2014 6:41 am

Hey Wolf, I read yours

I have to say I am surprised by your first two chapter... I wasn't expecting such development

Let's just say you caught me off guard XD

Looking forward to see how you develop your story ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Novel: Split   Sat May 03, 2014 3:34 pm

Nexius wrote:
Hey Wolf, I read yours

I have to say I am surprised by your first two chapter... I wasn't expecting such development

Let's just say you caught me off guard XD

Looking forward to see how you develop your story ^^

Thanks Nexi! I'm hard at work on it atm ^^; I just haven't taken the time to go back and polish up chapter 3 for release yet.
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