| | Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 |  |
|
|
|
| Author | Message |
|---|
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
 | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4  Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:23 pm | |
| So, what's John doing at the moment? _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
 | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:37 pm | |
| seeing what traps of his own he can mix into the dream Hunter created. : o | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:41 pm | |
| Ah, I see. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 1:04 am | |
| Posted. I really need to get to be getting to bed earlier.  _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:12 pm | |
| that's improper grammar.  | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:25 pm | |
|  *punches Payne in the throat* _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:29 pm | |
| *dodges*  | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 7:12 pm | |
| | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 06, 2015 7:47 pm | |
| Gracias. :0 _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Sun Oct 11, 2015 5:52 pm | |
| | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:04 pm | |
| About ti- I mean, thanks. :O _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:32 pm | |
| lol.
I've not been home much this weekend. | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Sun Oct 11, 2015 6:38 pm | |
| Mhmm.
Well, hurry up and finish edition 1 of my book. :0 Cause the second edition is already finished. I just have to proof-read it first. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 3:48 pm | |
| posted. you can end the dreamshare in your post. as previously stated, if you want to have Sofie invade John's dream, she's welcome to do so. just have her talk to Elliot for a minute and then plug in. I'll setup the scene once she's in. | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 4:50 pm | |
| All right. You sure you want to? :0 _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 5:00 pm | |
| I don't care one way or the other. : o
it's good character development, but it could also take a while.
so, I'll leave it up to you. | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 5:10 pm | |
| I don't mind the time. I just don't want a one step forward, two steps back situation lol. Sofie and John need to progress their relationship.  _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 5:14 pm | |
| that will depend entirely upon how Sofie deals with what she sees. : o | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:20 pm | |
| Hmm, I see. You tease. So, do any reading lately? I'm finishing v2 of the book, so you're rather far behind. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:24 pm | |
| I haven't done any reading lately.
quick question on that though.
do you want me to keep pointing out grammar and sentence errors, or should I focus more on the plot.
(if I'm not constantly reading things twice to make sure they sound right, I can move through the material a lot faster, but it won't be as detailed when I review it) | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:26 pm | |
| Well, for this version, you might as well just go through for content at this point, as some of the stuff you point out might have gotten changed in this version anyway. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:28 pm | |
| m'kay.
in that case, I can probably tear through it pretty quickly once I actually sit down to read it. : o | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:30 pm | |
| Okay. :0 Just keep in mind where you left off grammatically so when you go to the second edition, you can skim read up to that point. The chapters are all mostly intact, just some scenes have been added, and an occasional chapter or so. I'll probably highlight any major content changes or anything so you can look more critically at those parts. I'm reading through and doing a grammar check on this now, and I'm STILL picking up missed things lol. It's unbelievable. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Payne
Celebrity Composer
Posts : 6261
Join date : 2013-07-13
Age : 33
Location : Sitting alone outside a door that someone else kicked in. I'll wait for all eternity. Won't you invite me in?
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:37 pm | |
| | |
|
| | |
Prisma*Illya
Paramount Pagemaster
Posts : 34037
Join date : 2013-07-11
Age : 33
Location : The Black Versailles
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 Tue Oct 13, 2015 6:44 pm | |
| Okay. Let me know what you think. I'm interested to see your overall feedback, and then whether or not the second edition fixes any concerns. _________________ ~Vae Victis - The Black Lily Blooms~ | |
|
| | |
Sponsored content
| | Subject: Re: Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 | |
| |
|
| | |
| | Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #4 | |
|
