Inception - Hypnos Gambit OOC #3

If only he could open up his heart to the possibility of love.

In any case, at the moment, I need to head out.

i will post when I come back

And well, Rina pretty much picked him cause she won't "like" him so it's really upto Sofie to make him open his heart

Well, Sofie's not exactly an open book either.

True

Anyways, Posted

Thanks. :0

Well, did Payne send you the information?

Yeah, he did, but we're still discussing what exactly we're going to do. :0

okay

So, what's up?

Nothing really... You?

Oh, not much. Cleaning my room before I start working on my book. :0

How's your book coming along?

Pretty good. I got through my initial rough draft, but it was clearly rough.

I'm going back through and editing and putting in more scenes and fleshing things out, and I'm very pleased so far. I have over 30,000 words, but my goal is 50,000, so I still have a ways to go.

That's a lot of words

All the best

Sadly, it's really not. For young adult novels, 50,000 is kind of the minimal you should aim for. I think by adding in some material and fleshing out some of the scenes, I should be able to reach it. Might be tough though. I think my main problem is that I had a tendency to want to get right to the point, so I need to learn to take the time to build up to it.

Thanks.

Well I am confident that you could do this

Thanks.

It's a shame it takes so long to do though, as a part-time writer, since the main series has four books in all, and there's at least one spin-off prequel I wanted to do for it too.

Well you have planned it out, so it should work out fine

Yes. :0 I have a total outline of book 2 and parts of 3 and 4. And I know the basic gist of the spin-off book.

That's amazing

By the way, is Payne trying to think of smart way of say something to Rina?

Cause if John try to say something to Rina at the moment that would just make John look even more unprofessional

In any case, I can't wait what will happen to John and Sofie in the dream world

sorry guys, it's been a long day.
I'll have to get my post up tomorrow evening. :/

Oh i see, well take a good rest then

That's fine. :0

Well, bed time for me anyway. Night, guys.

*melts* So i have exams in like a week.

Uh huh.